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Frozen

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Cold air blows,
Shadows circle,
Feeling death
On your neck.
Trying to run,
To be free,
Frozen with fear.
Hair rising,

Moon c r e e p i n g,
Following,
Chasing,
Can't escape.

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  • PhantomsAngel87 Greeters member
    May 24

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    "Moon creeping"
    Wow. Damn!
    In love with that fantastic line


    You just keep showing how amazing of a poet you are hun!

    ♥
    Stay safe
    Love you
    ~Manda


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    February 20

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    Spooky!!! I held my breathe through that!!! I felt like someone was after me... omg! Well deserved HM for this!!


  • KnightOfShadows
    February 20

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    Very well written poem! I enjoyed it. Great take on the prompt and best of luck!


    -Steve-

  • Ashleigh London
    February 20

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    Fabulous sweet cakes. I like the expressions of desire and fear. You really poured a lot of emotion into this. Well done and good luck.

  • February Moon gold member
    February 20
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    I liked this.

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