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Tainted views

Missing image
Snow white,
Emerged from her slumber,
Only to find,
Her devotion wasn't the same.
Her direction has been mis guided,
Her prince never came,
As she remains a slave
to her coffin.

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  • Wow.
    The best Snow White related poem I have ever had the honour of reading


  • Ale E
    February 24

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    I really liked this. Its very nicely written and is expressed in such very small words. Congratulations.

    Thank you for entering. I wish you the best of luck in my contest.

  • creationsfromheart silver member
    February 21

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    This is nice, however I think would of been more orig, not using such a famous fairytale as snow white.


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    February 20

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    Ooooooo.... coolness!!!!!!!!! Where on earth did you come up with that idea??? It totally ROCKED!!!

    A fallen fairy tale... wicked!


  • tarcus silver member
    February 20
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    nice take good luck.
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