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Dreamcatcher Poet MoLuv10

 

 

It is whispered among the five elements of life,

a poet does write boldly with powers of

Earth, Fire, Water and Air.

They hush..... when gently he writes.

 

Ancients peek over his shoulder

and speak to his heart.

Unaware, he does not see, he is the "one,"

who passed through the nightmare of dreams. 

 

Transformed, a new lights sonnet of dawn.

 Powerfully rising each morn.

Unspoken hopes and dreams,

he catches in our poems.

 

Blessings he casts upon our sleeping souls.

 

Messages of encouragement.

Comments of growth,

feasted upon even the strongest of poets.

His humor and laughter does tickles our toes.

 

What a joy it is...  the beauty

of a Dreamcatcher at hand, a dearest friend.

Where all my good dreams, and lessons

learned do not disappear...

 

 in the twilight of dawn. 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


 

 


 

 

Author notes

Poet MoLuv10, through the thick and the thin of our lives, how important is has been...your encouragement
and blessings! Thankyou dearest poet for the laughter
too..and yes... you do tickle our toes with your humorous of souls.

http://allpoetry.com/moluv10

Thankyou Riftkin for the opportunity to tell him so!

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  • AsIThink gold member
    March 15

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    Fascinating...

    Wow...I really think this is an impacting piece. I agree with you; Mo is great and insightful. His sincerity leaps across cyberspace straight in my face. He is very supportive and encouraging and I wish him the best. You managed a wonderful tribute to a deserving soul. This opening was my favorite part:
    "It is whispered among the five elements of life?

    A Poet does write boldly with powers of

    Earth, Fire, Water and Air.

    They hush..... when gently he writes." Wonderful job.


  • motel silver member
    March 10

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    what a great gift you have given us all by writing this work ... to be inspired by a generous spirit to give the gift of appreciation. an example of true friendship. thanks.


  • Riftkin gold member
    March 9
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    Sweet poem for a friend Thank you for sharing you work here for this poet. Riftkin


  • fool no1
    February 26
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    Excellent

    A very unique piece with wonderful illustrations. Thoroughly enjoyed......Sunshine..


  • TwilightPanther Moderators member
    February 26

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    Beautiful...and the images for the minds eye are dancing in my head...niaish so much for sharing this wisdom with me...an honor to read


  • LittleMoon silver member
    February 26

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    A lovely write and beautifully illustrated. Also a very different, captivating and wonderful tribute. Well done my friend and niaish for sharing it with us here.

  • Beautiful

    anyw ays this is just a wonderfully penned interesting poem in which you managed to paint a beautiful picture that really opens up our eyes with your incredible beautiful wording. its amazing how well a poet can bring to life a poem with so few but perfectly worded poetry. any ways keep up the nice work and keep it up

    . Rewarded 6

  • laxrocks33 silver member
    February 21

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    Vivid and full of excellent imagery. Nice job explicating an image and painting a new idea for the reader.

  • suicideangel91
    February 21
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    WOW this poem has really captured my attention and i love it!!!!


  • Swangrnv gold member
    February 20

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    WOW!

    I'M blown away! I love this piece, you've honored a very great poet indeed, hell he has to be good he's my little bro! l.o.l.! Lady you sure have my respect! excellent write!

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  • Ephiphany gold member
    February 20

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    Ive just began to know mo and he is indeed a wonderful man

    so worthy of many Blessings to come. Thanks for the opportunity in reading such a dedication for such a deserving man. Absolutely marvelous.

    Ephiphany♥

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  • Zyskandar A Jaimot
    February 20

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    quite an accolade! very good write 'your own dreamcatcher' is quite a special thing/being always reminded/thought of 'dreamcatchers' of spiders webs waiting to ensnare only the most beautiful dreams/thoughts this is surely one of them thanks for sharing regards zaj

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  • grannyeri gold member
    February 20

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    What a lovely presentation you have created on this page - beautiful sidebar, pictures and lovely poem. What a lovely way to thank someone for being there for you and helping you on this site. Liked the flow and the sentiments you have expressed in these lines. Awesome.

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  • spiffyspat
    February 20

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    Woaaah. That was beautiful. It's very creative and different. -- That's why I like it so much.

    Super spiffy
    Jae.

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  • moluv10
    February 20

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    Wow! I'm Speechless! No one has ever done anything like this for me! Thank you so,so,so much for recognizing me the way you have. I love this so much! I wish you nothing but the best my dear sister.

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  • On.Fire.4.Christ.
    February 20

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    This was Awesome!

    I like the shiny dreamcatchers...lol
    Wonderful Imagery!

    "What a joy it is... the beauty of
    a dreamcatcher at hand, a dearest friend.
    Where all my good dreams, and lessons
    learned do not dissapear...
    in the twilight of dawn." <-------Favorite Line

    Wonderful Job!! : )

    Nikki


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