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Almost There

Hearth and home in sight
Winter yields, to eager feet

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  • songstress80
    October 19

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    such a short and sweet poem. some travel far distances to get home sometimes. this one seems to be for one who's walking in harsh winter snows. lovely written!

  • Topnotchsy
    September 14

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    I'm home with the flu, so I figured a short poem was perfect for me right now, and the imagery in this piece is wonderful!! I usually do not look forward to the winter, but this has me feeling warm inside about the upcoming months.

  • MoonStar005
    September 5
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    I like it.
    You're a really good poet!!

  • What a visualization of going home...Nostalgia made you this piece perhaps!

    Lovely two liner.

    Regards,


  • guardianhost gold member
    June 21
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    Smiling

    In CAnada I remember hurring home to warm my toes!

  • nice


  • lacef
    April 10
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    Nice visual


  • sora.
    September 13, 2008
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    "eager feet"
    i really like this.
    great work, & good luck.
    =]


  • daviscth silver member
    July 2, 2008

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    what a warm and fuzzy feeling reading this gave to me. I enjoyed the imagery in this short piece. Thanks for posting it.


  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    April 1, 2008

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    Short but beautifully done. I can easily step into this and feel it. I come from the norther parts with snow so this really impacts for me.


  • workingharleylady
    February 20, 2008

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    picture perfect

    Dang!!!! You should have at least placed in the top 4 somewhere. This describes the painting to the Nth degree, hands down. Beautifully penned. Best regards, Chrissy


    • BluesMan gold member
      February 21, 2008
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      Thank you for the comment I thought so to LOL Bill

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