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Lying Eyes

Shadows dance across his face
Glamour freeing me from his form
Linked by a thin line but a tight rope
With painted anger across the lines in his unearthly face

Distance in the broken place
A palace of forgotten things
Walls with blood running like water
With bitter thoughts hanging on like rubber

On beaches, bleak like grimy streets
The colours distort your eyesight
Your mind, breaking apart
With a groan, we lose our heads

Piercing sounds hanging over
Terrifying monsters from those of the darkest minds
With beasts of epic proportion
Coming out from the shadows' deepest bend

Broken mirrors lace the dirty floors
In the house of a madman
We step lightly, tracing the wall
No more panic in the eyes of the liar

Author notes

Song lyrics that inspire- "A Sweet Kiss From The After Life" By Oh, Juliet!

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  • KnightOfTheRose gold member
    February 20, 2008

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    Good job again Jess I enjoyed reading this piece. It was really good. Keep up the excellent work!


    -Steve-