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Decant to Yellow

Coffee Pot Coffee Pot rolls down the rue
spoiled sweet-sugared Momma'd and spooned
cane to the ready, trick at the heel
Soul of Montmartre reels heading pour vous

wiry cancan
bistros reviewed
Pigalle stays ready in offer of hue

Coat Hangar Coat Hangar bends at the knee
Henri bleu Henri
impressions imbue

wiry cancan
bistro renewed
Henri is ready to offer his view




sips brush an elbow
parfume takes flight
night's bright beginning
yellow delights

Author notes

Lithograph/ Moulin Rouge: La Goulue in four colors (1891)

Henri Toulouse-Lautrec's nicknames were Coffee Pot, Coat Hangar and 'The Soul of Montemartre.'     Pigalle (pronounced Piga): lower red light district of Mountmartre (Mount martyr) on the Right Bank in Paris.   An alcoholic, Henri filled his cane with green absinthe which is poured over sugar (spoon.)   Short in stature from inherited complications and raised by an aristocratic/doting mother, much influenced his sexuality, relationships and art.


Hue: The attributes of colors that permit them to be classed as green, red, blue, yellow or any intermediate between any contiguous pair of these colors.

Blue: May signify: aristocracy, depressive feelings, blue laws  etc.

 

Decant:  To pour (a liquid) from one container into another. 

Decant: To pour off without disturbing the sediment.

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  • ea silver member
    September 10

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    hmmm, this is fun and the notes are really interesting! I was going through a little absinthe phase last year but the one contest I ran on it got only one response and the poem I wrote about it got deleted from the contest it was in because it rhymed, I think. Love this detail about the cane! My mom even sent away for an absinthe spoon for me. Now THERE's an emoticon we could use!


  • scentedrose
    April 10

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    How did I overlook this one?
    Very good, again of course.
    I don't know why you are shy about your talent.

    Have you noticed I like to leave comments?
    Take a lesson from that kley


  • Cinnarry gold member
    March 17
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    ahhhh...yes...indeed..sigh...

  • Apparition
    March 16

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    Exquisite picture you have painted.

    Your poems are always so full of double entendre while also being so vividly visible. You take the reader there
    to follow behind him, to sit beside him, to see inside
    his mind and life for a little while. Excellent just doesn't quite cover it all..it is so much more.


  • Matt Holck
    March 9

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    I keep thinking
    ladybug ladybug
    fly away home

    the rhythms are well framed adding a needed struture to the picture

  • ErrantHeart
    February 22
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    It's Toulouse...can you tighten it up a peck?

    Couldn't resist!

    Well this is rather good. I wouldn't a notion of what it was about without the author notes. But I like the way it reads. Nice flow, nice rhyme go. And I liked the inclusion of un petit peu of French into the mix.

    And three lll's in yelllow!


  • Katie Lazette
    February 20

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    Very well written. Thanks for the information on Lautrec's nicknames. I wasn't aware that he had any.
    Nice touch for the poem. Good to see you writing again.

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