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Til Death Do Us Part

Promises made to the grave
We held each others hand
Even in death we are saved
We walked to the promised land

You had me from the start
Til death do us part

With nothing left to say
Yet so much to be told
Passion has led the way
Devotion will uphold

You saved my broken heart
Til death do us part

Souls entwined as one
Lovers until the end
Forever has just begun
Faith alone transcends













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  • Honeydew
    March 9, 2008
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    nice write

    nice poem!....lots of rhyme...thank you for entering my contest.


  • delightfulmess silver member
    February 25, 2008

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    Nice job. Great take on the pic.
    Thank you for your entry in my contest.


    Delila

  • goalsv
    February 21, 2008

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    Very well done, nice job of putting the vows in the positive and reminding that it is till death do us part.