Having you there
When the rest of the world don't care
The faces we make
The promises we never break
The picture's we take
Mark the memories we make
The necklace's we where
Show how much we care
Author notes
http://allpoetry.com/poem/3940273
A contest entry
- Pick a word - Write a poem in 10 lines or less (F) by The Fun House.
1050 points, ended December 14, 2008, 29 entries
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Comments
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I think these are beautifully done sentiments. Best friends are hard to come by and hard to keep. I know I have 2 of the best for over 20 years
Great poem
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awww cute poetry
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This was very nicely written, short but affective. Coming from someone who is lucky enough to have a very close friend, I understand your bond. Don't ever let it break, keep on writing!!
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hey
thx for the comment!!!
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lol wow i really like it...lo...u to look like bffs for ever!!!!!!....have fun and keep maken vidoz!!!!
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this was beautiful
i have 2 wonderful best friends for over 20 years. i luv them, we've been through thick, thicker, and thin
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like you say you have bin through thick and thin.
so have we and it brings us closer together.
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Bravo...
This was so much fun and wonderful to watch...
My best friend and I have been together for 18 years...Our children are 3 months apart...we both had children later in life and were loving it....
You two have so much fun ahead.....
I adore this poem and video it was a real treat to watch and share....
Much love and many blessings to you both!!!!
~A~
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thx for the comment!!!
our parents are friends and i think that is what makes us so close.we have bin through every thing together
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that's sweet!
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