Loving and holding
In their arms and memories
You'll always be loved
Author notes
haiku
Big sister would be fine
WingedWolf
A contest entry
- LOOKING FOR LE AP FAMILY!! by joelegy.
500 points, ended February 22, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - In Search of an AP Familyy!!! by With Broken Wings.
300 points, ended April 20, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - round one (for everyone) prewrite contest ENTER ENTER ENTER (AND YES THAT MEAN'S YOU too by serenity silvermoon.
927 points, ended February 16, 1509 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I like it!! I would love to have you as an AP big sis in my fam!! Yayy!! =]
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Sounds like you are missing someone close to you. I know that feeling very well.
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yeah...
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THANK YOU!!!
haha.. kiaku's are so infuriating to read.. because usually people get the syllable scheme messed up.. but this one is right, and the words are VERY beautiful!! I really like this poem!!
Good luck in the contest!
What family member did u want to be?
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oh, he he... a sister would be fine. WingedWolf is my username, if you don't know that.
I love writing haikus.
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I like and am learning how to write haiku. This one reads sad...almost like an epitaph. Good luck in the contest.
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wow. the words aren't that sad... to me anyways... but i was depressed when i wrote it... how weird that is that my emotions reflect in my words.
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