My heart crumbled into your coffin,
as you promised to live forever.
Dieing within the hour,
leaving me detached with emptiness.
Your love was the ultimate gift,
smothering me while living,
leaving me in the dark.
Used to the silence surrounding me;
Suffocating on air.
I was ready to live,
to be reborn.
Until you dragged me
into your world of hate.
Seeing through fog,
clouding my vision;
No where else to search
for a reason to live.
Why hope for miracles,
Or look for angels;
When they demise
within sight.
Worked hard to distant myself
to slip through the cracks.
Ended up falling,
Joining you,
even on your death bed.
Fading into black
Trapped with you to the grave
{And beyond}
A contest entry
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I really did like it. It was dark and pretty, and you created some pretty vivid imagery with your words! Well done, and thanks for sharing. Good luck!
Laura xxx
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Despairing. Loved it
Thanks for entering!
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Very good. It's full of emotions. I enjoyed reading it.
Thank you for entering my contest.
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wow that is so awsome. i love pomes of darkend feelings they inspier me
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Oooh, this was very prettily written. I feel the despair, and enjoyed the use of language. The ending was poignant. Aces. x
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