Each new cut
brings me closer to freedom
will anyone care
is anyone there to notice
or will my suicide
go unseen until
it is to late?
This is what I hate
no one cares
I sit and cry
watching the blood flow
and hoping soon
it all will end
I can only bleed so much
before I have no more!
Author notes
For a contest...I havent cut since Jan. dont freak out....It was something I could relate to...
A contest entry
- Emo/Cutting/Suicide by LostInTheDream.
500 points, ended March 18, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What ya think?
Comments
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a precious poem that makes me very glad, today. poignant and sweet, every line is a joy to read. you are a talented poet and i am so glad to read your work.

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great poem doll
and great job with the not cutting
keep up the great work
endless -
yes
kinda what i feel thank you for your entry!



