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Each new cut

Each new cut
brings me closer to freedom
will anyone care
is anyone there to notice
or will my suicide
go unseen until
it is to late?
This is what I hate
no one cares
I sit and cry
watching the blood flow
and hoping soon
it all will end
I can only bleed so much
before I have no more!

Author notes

For a contest...I havent cut since Jan. dont freak out....It was something I could relate to...

A contest entry

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  • a precious poem that makes me very glad, today. poignant and sweet, every line is a joy to read. you are a talented poet and i am so glad to read your work.


  • oldphotosonlybringt
    February 20, 2008
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    great poem doll
    and great job with the not cutting
    keep up the great work

    endless


  • LostInTheDream
    February 20, 2008
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    yes

    kinda what i feel thank you for your entry!