Wispy clouds
Chase wind and wave
Upon the shore
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Perfect black and white
Reflected stars
Lap at my toes
Author notes
um i went to the beach for the first time in years...heh yeh i love the beach.
Please tell me what you think
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Perfect black and white
Reflected stars
That's my favorite verse in the poem! This poem is totally awesome! I love the feeling that it has and the way that it has the ability to move someone. I hope to see more good poetry from you and to see you around. I always have contests going on, you should enter a poem sometime. I am pretty sure that you will win some!
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You must have had a wonderful day to have been inspired to write these beautiful haiku
Dee
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Oh you little dreamy chickie... this is lovely, I do love the beach myself and you have penned it all so perfectly.... gorgeous as you
Karen
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Beautiful
Just like the Haiku I read before yours you have made me feel like I was at the beahc again and I am only 4 hours away from the beaches of Washington State but I have to admit its fun walking hot sandy beache sin the Summer time but any ways this was just a powerful duo of Haikus about the beach and I enjoyed reading them. keep up the great work and keep going bakc to the beaches too because you created some fantastic poetry
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oh what beautiful imagery this
holds. I love the lines about
"Perfect black and white
Reflected stars
Lap at my toes"
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I like these two writes. They describe the beach waters and shore wonderfully. Great imagery.
Kelli
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