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In my tummy

I feel little butterflies
wiggling in my tummy
they feel funny
and it is so cool
it had a heartbeat
and all this is going on in my tummy....

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the baby

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  • individuality gold member
    May 6

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    an exquisite poem that shows inspiring talent! impressive writing, a joy to read and appreciate. you should be very proud of this poem because it is truly lovely!


  • paullallady silver member
    February 20, 2008

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    oh wow, I really love this. I love
    the way that you describe the feeling
    of a baby while pregnant.
    great job on this one.


  • lexy23
    February 20, 2008

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    wow

    instead,
    of a poem about cliched love and butterfly feelings

    i like how you've used
    it to describe pregnancy
    instead of love.


    xxx