I surrender
as the bride
to a new dawn
for the moon rising
is my sun
Crimson shadows
will be my future
and become
my past
I kneel before you
and you smile
at the beauty
of your embrace
“I am now one of you”
I hiss
In a list
A contest entry
- Semi Quickie by MysticalRayne.
475 points, ended February 21, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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"for the moon rising is my sun" excellent line. Again, another exquisite write ~Bret~
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This is an excellent use of the prompt! I liked this
, good luck in the contest also thanks for commenting on my poem too
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Excellent write on the picture prompt! This is eerie and I'm staying away from you! LOL Best wishes in this contest! Loved it!
Shana
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This peace flows so nicely - well done and good luck in the contest
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Well done! Great job! Hope you do well in the contest.
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An eerie write. Wicked but very well written. I think you did an awesome job. Good luck in the contest.
Kelli
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