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C.U.T.

Carrying cotton candy
Upstairs underneath the carousel
Cassie trips three times
Ursula catches Cassie
Then carries Cassie upstairs
To Cassie's uncle

Author notes

Option 3) pick 3 letters... C.U.T.

and man, that was harder than i thought it would be!

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  • takemypainaway
    February 22, 2008

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    you were the first to try this and im glad you did

    i like this

    poor cassie must be clumsy

    interesting letter choise

    thank you for entering

    --kat


  • Kelli Marie
    February 20, 2008

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    Oh...not what I thought indeed. I think you did an outstanding job. I enjoyed this very much. Good luck in the contest.
    Kelli