Golden sunset falls on dreams,
Nature's fancy, whirling beams,
As the sun does fall to sleep,
Keep me in my daze so deep.
Golden sunset never failing
Always bright as it is sailing
All the way across the moon,
Like an empty ancient ruin.
Be within my golden dreams
Oh sunset pure of sunny streams
Cascading in this wading field
Of corn and rivers of flowers that yield.
Teach me how to love thy moon
Oh golden sunset pure with whom
I talk to like an open flower
The one who gives me faith and power.
Golen sunset, forever be
My imagination, my eternity
Thy soft head never fails to sleep
Within my dreams where golden corn gets reaped.
A contest entry
- ANOTHER NATURE PICTURE PROMPT by Roaddog Wolf.
450 points, ended March 5, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Good rhyme and flow and all in all a good write, again I have trouble with the capital letter start of each line, but a nicely penned poem still. Thank you for the entry and good luck in the contest.
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Just beautiful, wonderful imagery throughout. I so enjoyed reading good luck in the contest
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