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i miss you

i miss you,i miss you so bad
i wont forget you, yeah i know that its sad
this kills me to say
but its true
i sould be over you
i loved you and i still do
i hope you can remember me
i wished that we'd always be
you wanted to stay but your bitch of a mom made you leave
the day you went away
that fatal day
i miss your eyes
i miss your smile
you said you would visit in a while
but i never saw you again
and now im sitting in my den
wondering what we could of been
it kills me to wonder
if you have a new "baby"
im missing you like crazy
dumb people think im lazy...but thats why they are dumb
im not lazy...im heartbroken
no i havnt misspoken
i still love you

Author notes

this was for a x bf that had to move that i still do love.

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    WELL YOU KNOW WHAT???? MAYBE IT DOES HAVE SOME OF THE SAME LINES BUT THAT DOESNT MEAN I STOLE IT!!!! I HAVE NOT HEARD THAT SONG BEFORE! SO I DONT FIND IT POSSIBLE TO STEAL WORDS FROM A SONG I HAVENT HEARD! and that is not plaguerism, plaguerism is when you steal the WHOLE THING or MOST of a piece of writing for something that is going to be PUBLISHED or TURNED IN FOR A GRADE!!!!!!


    PS. i will NOT tolerate ANY more harrassment or i will be talking to the managers of Allpoetry
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    no its not plaguerism because that song doesnt exist. it may be like one of her songs but if you seriously think i am going to steal work from one of my favourite singers, then you need help. im not a theif, i just must have a great mind since great minds think alike....if you people are going to accuse me of stealing work, then you need to listen to things more clearly.
  • its a hannah montana song!

  • Kelli Marie
    February 20

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    Oh that is such a painful write. When we lose someone because of moving. I know, believe me. It is so bad of a feeling. The pain lingers forever it seems. I hope it eases for you. A good write.
    Kelli
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