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~Nature

 

 

Dawn's palatte

paints a shapeless mirage

upon the skies canvas,

as the sun's footprints,
caress the ocean's skin.

 

~ Nature's awakening

 

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  • Candy6
    May 15, 2008
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    Nice write.


  • Roaddog Wolf
    March 2, 2008

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    "as the sun's footprints, caress the ocean's skin." nicely done, good luck in the contest and thanks for your entry xx


  • takemypainaway
    February 22, 2008

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    amazing peice

    i wish i could shine through like this when i first

    wake.. your poem i svery beautiful

    Best of luck in the contest

    *

    --kat


  • paullallady silver member
    February 20, 2008

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    what a beautiful piece of poetry
    painting a glorious picture for
    us. good job on this.
    good luck in the contest.


  • Jeremy0826 gold member
    February 20, 2008

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    Such a beautiful take on this picture.
    I love the thought that you put into
    this one. Well done my friend and
    all the best to you here!




    Jeremy0826

  • PerfectImperfection
    February 20, 2008

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    Such a well thought take on the image in so few words. Nicely penned!!! Best wishes in the contest!


  • Kelli Marie
    February 20, 2008

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    Breath taking....stunning even. Both the picture and your write. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
    Kelli

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