Why do you antagonise.
Do you not realize.
Do you know you are
being cruel
Do you know you will
have no friends.
This will happen in the end.
Author notes
bullying
A contest entry
- Bullying by basilisk.
800 points, ended March 12, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Short but gets the point across. I get bullied so I know exactly how it feels.
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We all question the bully's intentions, particularly if you are the target of their attentions. But they do have friends, allies and they often use their power over other's to impress these people.
On a technical note: use appropriate punctuation. The structure of your poem is a bit choppy and lacks flow.
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A lot of bullies have no true friends to begin with, just people who are scared of them and would rather be 'friends' than on the receiving end. A great piece, short but powerful impact. Best of luck in the contest with it
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Yes ! perfect !
Bullies never win in the end, and no matter what age they are either!
They all fall, and , will have no one
Good luck
Julie x
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Eh... Not every bully loses their friends. I just thought that that line was false. Other than that I thought that this was a good portrayal of what bullying becomes. The bully may end up as not the favorite person, but in the end I think that they just become a target of bullying themselves. Thats my opinion.
dani -
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Excellent
An excellent portrayal -- Well worded & versed!
Good luck in the contest
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