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my final good bye

i am traped inside the world alone
no one to run to
its just
me
my blade
and i
so sick of being pushed and shuved to the ground
being broken

i wish i could runaway

please dont ask me if i am ok beacuse i'm not

 so dont even try

to make me smile 

i dont know how

i just wanna cry

as i watch the blood run down my arms

as a nother scar is made on my wrist

my time is up

i am all aloe

so i pack my bags

and run away

no one will miss me

so as i say my final good byes

i will miss u all

but it is time for me to go

what do u think?

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  • Chrissi
    February 21, 2008
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    babe you spelt a lot of stuff wrong! let me help you edit this sometime!
    but other than that!
    it is way good! i love it! it shows true emotion and i like it!
    I WILL ALWAYS MISS YOU IF YOU EVER LEAVE ME BEFORE I GRADUATE!!!
    dont ever forget that!


  • xToxicxCupcakesx
    February 20, 2008

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    AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!
    Nope!
    This is a good poem but nope!