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Open Your mind

slip away into the darkness
and scream
release the pain

learn to breath life
and live again

for too soon things
grow cold and bleak

then the darkness
becomes your life

becoming a child of the night

wondering aimlessly and seeking 


blood flows cold
life becomes your rotting soul

Author notes

just rambling better to let the pain out in the end

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  • plainoljoe
    February 21

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    when the scream releases the pain, turn the opposite way before you inhale. The cold bleak darkness shall then be shunned, and a new "child of the 'Light'" shall reign forevermore

    Joe

    • Masters Rose
      February 25
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      oooohhh just loved that comment
      nice
      frog

      • plainoljoe
        February 26
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        Froggy, as abstract as my advice may seem, it will work---just like 'shunning'


        Joe

  • Disturbed Prodigy gold member
    February 21

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    you know it is almost like a warning you could say, like someone wrote this under candle light to warn others about the night, keep it flowing
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