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Moving on

I knew that you were gone before anybody told me.
Because a part of my heart died with you.
I will never be completely whole again.
Nothing will ever be the same as before.
It hurts.
God, what it hurts.
But I have to move on.
I have to be strong.  

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  • TeenageTears
    February 21

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    Short but effective, I know exactly how you feel.
    I especially relate to the first two and last two lines. This is a very simple but strong write, a credit to you.

  • brkn4u
    February 20
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    wow

    i think i know what your talkin about. this poem reaches out to me. i personifies exactly how i felt when someone really close to me died. which hurts but thats okay because its better to feel something than nothing adn thats what this poem (no matter how short does) so thank you