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Morning Gloria: Autumn Angel

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Attentive golden harbinger

politely reminds all

with placid, loving grace.

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10 words, picture prompt

In a list

A contest entry

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  • Auburn Sunrise gold member
    February 20

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    adorable picture

    and wonderful little poem...
    again, just a little constructive criticism (not that I'm in a position to give it right now, but...): I miss your longer pieces.
    You arrive at such brilliant and profound conclusions when you allow yourself space to stretch your thoughts and words.
    Still, you do brevity so well.


  • Margaret Denham gold member
    February 20

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    I'm coming to expect something wonderful every time I click on your name...and I'm never disappointed. Every word flows with a natural grace to form the most beautiful picture in my mind.




  • grannyeri gold member
    February 20

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    Lovely three lines you have penned here, 10 words say so much. Great picture prompt - enjoyed the read.