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[ I sit and sigh but never cry ]

I sit and sigh but never cry
I'm talking on the phone.
You called to beg and plead, yet I
Can't simply drop the phone.

You need a break, a pause, a hold
Simply for thinking's sake.
I should've known before you told
me, you are just a fake.

You play me like a child's game
Roll the dice to spin a wheel
I've lost all respect to shame
You do not know all you feel?

You say you love and feel and care...
I find it hard to see.
You say you will always be there...
Then prove these words to me.

Good, Bad, or the Ugly?

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  • oldphotosonlybringt
    February 20, 2008

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    nice work dolly
    the pain and strong love was all to clear
    you took this poem away great work
    lots of love and take care,

    endless-lover


  • Dygurl
    February 20, 2008

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    Nicely said, way not to let people run over you. Good bad or Ugly? deffinatly good. A write of strength. Nice job.


  • Kelli Marie
    February 20, 2008

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    I really like the lead in line, and the ending. Of course I like the inbetween as well. This is a great write.
    Kelli