All alone in this world,
Away from people I have been hurled.
Black and white is all I see,
But wait, there is three!
The other color that is here,
Gives me great cheer.
In this world that is so blue,
I need something to brighten my view.
The one color that brightens my day,
Makes this world less than gray.
The one color that I hold so dear,
And decreases my fear.
This one color that erases my dread,
is the color…. Red!
The reason why is simply this,
It fills our lives with great bliss.
For red is the color that symbols love,
Without this all good things, we would be deprived of.
A contest entry
- Some off the wall options by takemypainaway.
450 points, ended March 3, 2008, 24 entries
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Comments
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like this
the color red is a good pick
I like the reasoning
and the rhyme
thank you for entering
--kat -
I like it. I have nothing bad to say about it... I'm having a very good day so my comments are nice. Well keep up the good work. Good luck in your contest.
Dani -
A nicely written piece of poetry. I enjoyed the read very much. I hope it does well in the contest. Good job.
Kelli -
Very good start here, the structure could use alittle work but the message is clear.
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