Animals that fly atop mountain peaks,
Birds.
The huge, orange celestial orb,
Setting on the island's horizon,
Sun.
Green stems that grow,
From the soft, ferile soil,
Flowers.
This is truly,
Nature at its best.
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Written November 24th, 2003
A contest entry
- Anything you want by Mind Blowing.
250 points, ended December 25, 2003, 127 entries
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I liked the view in this poem! A short write but long enough to show the nature's beauty!
Well done!
Mari
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i too liked the way u decribed "sun" and the imagry in the whole thing was great...it really is nature at its best. nice write
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to me again please, thank you -
nice-ness
i like how you go around what things are to show how they almost feel "orange celestial orb" was an awesome way to write that
nice write to you too -
Hey, I think this is actually kinda cool... I like the way u wrote it, describing something, then telling u wut it is... I think it could proly be longer, but thats it... oh, & is it suppose to say fertile in the 3rd stanza? jus wondering... hehe, i like the part:
The huge, orange celestial orb,
Setting on the island's horizon,
Sun.
"celestial", wut a cool word... well, see ya at school tomorrow, i suppose... 1/2 day! yay!!! bye! LYLAB!
~Kelsey!~
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OK OK OK OK
Ok is all I can say about this poem it's not bad it's Ok, Ok -
blake,
whats up?hey this is cool. not the type of poetry im in to but its still cool. well ima read ur other poem so HOLLA!
*amanda*
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