Two skylarks rise in union,melodious echoes beg encore
sincere hearts reach elusive zenith, exaultation as they fly
Compare how rich each notes becomes, as parallels skim the air
acrobatic emotion demonstrated, sweeping performance in the sky
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Elusive wings touch for seconds, never few and far between
romantic sonnett in maiden flight, whisps of feather lasting long
Playful bellet between beating hearts, understanding so alike
sunlight catches spiralled twists, above cathederals tall and strong.
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Universal in creative movement, altruistic in thought and deed
swallow, nightingale, humming bird, bow to the skylark, then concede.
Author notes
There is no particular form to this piece, I just wrote it as it came to mind.
Please tell me what you think
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I liked this very much. Birds are beautiful creatures and I think you wrote a beautiful piece of poetry.
Kelli -
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Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my poem, I do appreciate it.
Katie
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lovely
Beautiful sequence of thoughts. Well done my friend. Words chosen well and used.
*Go with God* my friend,
Valerie
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Thank you so much for your wonderful comments, I do appreciate it.
Katie
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