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i wonder

i wonder if he looks at me
the way i look at him
i wonder if he dreams
the same dreams i do
i wonder if he looks at my words
as often as i look at his
i wonder if he loves me
the way i love him

I wrote this one myself...

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  • Beauty Of Silence
    July 5, 2008

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    AWW!

    this is such a sad poem! i love it and i can totally relate... oh well, lifes like that! hope things work out for you... keep pennning kays!

    AWESOME!


  • rollingawaythestone
    February 25, 2008
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    this makes me feel....ummm....sad but it is very true love it


  • innerbeauty88
    February 23, 2008
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    is this someone special the love of your life?


  • Kelli Marie
    February 20, 2008

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    I have wondered the same thing about someone special in my life as well. This is a nice write. I enjoyed the read.
    Kelli