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I Can See

My heart once stirred me long ago,
The cold echo of an empty pit;
A distant voice sought me to show
How I needed His Spirit;
I heard the words: "Come to Life,"
And knew I had to answer;
Releasing me, He judged as right,
Healing me of sin's cancer;

Now I can see the God Who made me
On the throne of His grand kingdom;
His grace puts me on my knees
The truth gives me freedom;

I can see the God who loves me
On the cross revealing His glory;
Before His presence evil flees,
Yet makes me part of His story;

All my life is turned around;
Seen through the Godhead factor;
Child praising Father is the sound
Since I'm not a religious actor;

Unless one is born again,
He cannot see God's kingdom;
Until then, we're blind with sin,
For us there is no freedom.
Come and see the God Who made you
On the throne of His grand kingdom;
Give Him the praise that He's due
Let the truth give you freedom;
Come and see the Lord who loves us,
He is glory on a cross;
Know His name; He is Jesus;
His blood saves the lost.




© Bob Barra, 1-19-08

Author notes

"Jesus answered and said to him, 'Most assuredly, I say to you, unless one is born again, he cannot see the kingdom of God.'”--John 3:3

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  • goalsv
    February 21

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    Beautiful and poetic way to share the Gospel of Christ, We are commanded by God to spread the Gospel and this song sure does that. Amen!

  • Zyskandar A Jaimot
    February 20

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    "The cold echo of an empty pit;" very good phrase/line yes come and see the NAZARENE indeed good write alittle 'preachy' at the end thanks for sharing regards zaj

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  • grannyeri gold member
    February 20

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    Liked the rhythm, rhyme and flow of these lines - wonderful words of faith and how this has made you a different person. Easy to read and understand. Looks like the lost has been found when it comes to your life.

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  • debilynn gold member
    February 20

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    a beautiful, well written poem. it speaks of such truth. God is good. i love these lines:
    "His grace puts me on my knees
    The truth gives me freedom"
    and this also:
    "Unless one is born again,
    He cannot see God's kingdom;
    Until then, we're blind with sin,
    For us there is no freedom."
    these lines just speak so much. i really enjoyed reading this. thank you for sharing. it's not that i am afraid of dying, i am ready to meet my maker. i just don't want to do that quite yet. i am afraid of the pain of surgery thank you dear brother, for caring so much. God bless you always


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    February 20

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    Pertiful

    This is wonderful i like the lines we are blind with sin. That is very powerful. Excellent Write Cara


  • troyias gold member
    February 20

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    Beautiful

    Words well chosen and full of truth and wisdom as always. Great Job of praise as always.

    *Go with God* my brother,

    Valerie

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