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Stars

If we should ever see the stars again
would it come time to say good bye to all the pain
like we should have so many years before

I saw the tears you held inside
was it for the stars that never shown
or for us losing what we held close

Many times I've wondered
if the stars will ever shine again
that u might take and hold me once more

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Song inspired, THANK GOD!!! I was going crazy not being able 2 write something. Tell me plz what u think
02/20/08

Say What You Want, If it's hurtful u'll be ignored

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  • Disturbed Prodigy
    February 21, 2008

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    i think you haven't lose your touch my friend, this is a golden poem if i had ever seen, keep it flowing