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Strangers on a Train

To the sweet-face Newington boy on the 7:25 to Central this morning-

Suddenly the musicals in my ears
Made sense.
As your smile lit up the carriage
[Not to mention Skid Row…]

You made my morning
[day.week.month]
& more importantly,

You Made Me Smile.

[especially with that last glance on the platform…]

To the sweet-faced Newington boy on the 7:25 to Central this morning-

[Your beautiful smile will be dancing
through my mind all day…]

Thank you. ♥

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Written 20.2.08 with a real stimulus ^.^

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  • APoeticDreamer
    February 20
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    I liked this. I would say more but I have to go. Keep up the good job.

    Dani