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Garden of Light

The sun shines brightly in the summer sky
Overhead the little birds fly
The grass underfoot, the rustling of  trees
The wind blowing softly throughout the leaves

Slowly gathering nectar the busy bees
Gently hum as they land on the leaves,
The beautiful flowers, the colours so bright
Glistening and shining in the golden sunlight

Standing and staring in this beautiful place
Knowing all is given to us in good grace
So we can enjoy as we journey along
Life’s pathway of learning of how to be strong

Pondering sometimes why we are here
Knowing all is perfect if we are of good cheer
Knowing all has a place and all is one
In the garden of life as we look to the sun

We are those flowers as we unfold within
The light of our soul’s journey then begins
Remembering to make our own garden bright
As we learn and go forward and connect with our light

Reaching out to the brightness with all of our soul
Knowing we are going towards our own goal
Our goal being love, our love being light
As we make our own garden with the colours of light







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  • trekkergirl
    October 24, 2008

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    you write very well. I like your rhyme it does not seem forced at all. Your poem flows very well too. Thanks for sharing and thanks for entering into my contest.


  • sora.
    September 17, 2008
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    wow, i dont always enjoy rhyme, but this is fantastic.
    lovely, bright imagery.
    =]
    great work!