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A Trickling Memory

Fire burning patiently inside my heart
Melting each breath of life
Words shouting with pain, a blood stained bath   

Blood heated memories, resting deeply on my pillow
Desiring painful breaths to slow my troubles 
Blood stained water trickling down my cheek
Leaving my consciousness destroyed and weak

A crying stranger feeling the pain
Watching life die as down comes the rain
Fight for your life, words speak from above
Crawl from the shadows my pain felt love

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  • MySonTrippEchoes
    October 23, 2008
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    I TOTALLY JUS LUV WAT U WROTE IT KINDA HARD 4 ME 2 EXLPAIN


  • PurpleEmoFoofCheese
    June 4, 2008
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    wow. i just clicked on this, and i am glad that i did. this poem is amazing- you are so talented! the flow of words, and the picture it creates is mind blowing. i would like your permission to post this on my page ((credited to you of course)) i will put who wrote it in big letters...can i?