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Winter Yet Lingers

Missing image

As spring quietly beckons

with just anticipation

as spirits rise.

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Picture prompt with 10 words

In a list

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  • BellaD
    February 24
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    Well done!

    Ten precise words that send your message. Nice job.


  • Auburn Sunrise gold member
    February 20

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    nice!

    Succinct - I believe is the word I'm looking for.
    Lovely images invoked by this little gem of a poem.


  • Brooklyn NYC gold member
    February 20
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    Good work

    Yes I am ready for spring time again , great imagery


  • paullallady silver member
    February 20

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    You have created an image of hope
    and anticipation with your poem.
    This is really good. good luck in
    the contest.

  • Margaret Denham
    February 20

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    Spring and the time of rebirth, but spring brings us closer to summer and the end of winter indulgences. Happy and sad at the same time.



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