Lost in the shimmering pools
Of her sparkling brown eyes
They replicate her passion
Of those she loves
Of those she doesn’t
Lost in her reflection
Lost in her eyes
Author notes
this is random
but my best feature is my eyes
In a list
please tell me what you really think
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I love short poems that give us a nugget of truth. Our eyes are always revealing of the depths of our feelings. I hope you are enjoying these title challenges. I look forward to reading more of your poems. Peace, Liz
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I love my eyes, too. And I love this poem. Lost in her reflection. Lost in her eyes. Wonderfully done. Thank you for writing with my title.
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SweetXDestiny, The eyes are but windows to the soul and you have opened that window to share the beauty of yours through these words. What a wonderful take on the title this one is. Short and so succinct. It filled my mind's eye with vivid imagery through that mirror's reflection. Thank you for sharing with all of us and keep that ink flowing. Love and God bless, Joyce
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i love this sis its a very good write. keep up the good work sweetie.
i love you lots.
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