Either I care to much or to little
It doesn’t matter about what
Cause I can never get all the portions right
With my family and all those members
I sit, make sure I laugh on cue,
But mostly stair off into a speechless daze
My mother is always telling me,
That im not concentrating in school
Because of all of my extra-curriculars
Most people say that I take my art class
All to seriously, But they don’t understand,
I need it to breath
Either way in some aspects of my life
Im lacking and others im above and beyond
I wish I could have an equal blend of the two
But then again, life is full of disproportions
&& with out them it wouldn’t be that interesting
Author notes
I was originally writing this for Sonya's contest about what you care about . . . But I took this poem in a different direction.
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how do you spell Q properly?
[it feels good to write again]
A contest entry
- Our Poor Teenage Hearts by PonyPride.
950 points, ended April 21, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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very good job, and very vallid point
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I like it. See, a reason to have contests! Even if the poems go in a different direction
I'll help you care about the boring stuff like school
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I do care about school! =P
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Because I make you do your homework!
Haha just kidding. I know you care. -
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psshh, its not 'cause brother has been prepping me for collage since middle school or anything && he would disown me if I didnt do good in school
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It's cue.
Nice write.
I liked it. =)
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Really awesome poem. X3 Nice work Amber~!
(and I think the word you're looking for is "cue") -
hey this is awsome art must mean alot to you
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yeah, it keeps me sane . . . that and writing
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