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Teardrops

Thrice they hit the floor.
A splash of silent emotion,
A beautiful release of energy,
They tear me apart.

It's the love you've always wanted,
It's the hurt you've always felt.
Yet the commiseration you desire,
Will not swell from those eyes.

So I reject this constant,
These burning teardrops.
Instead I'll satiate my pain
With my endless threnody.

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  • MoonHaze
    February 20, 2008

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    Wow, I really like it. Vocab is really good as well. What made you write this one? I really do like it!!!


    • Naoki Keisuke
      April 5, 2008
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      Ehh, I had to write a poem for English, and conveniently, I had quite a few things on my mind worth the time xD