There is a girl who sits by her bed,
She prays and prays, but wishes she was dead.
Her life is horrible and really insane,
She doesn’t know what to do, there’s no one to blame.
She thinks she is bad and can never get better,
Until one day she got an interesting letter.
It told her, “I love you with all of my soul,
I want you to be the one who fills this hole,
My chest it burns, I feel like dying,
But you’re the one that makes me keep trying.”
She looked at this letter, smiles and laughs,
She begins to feel better, and loses her wrath.
Who was the letter from you might ask,
It was from me, the man of the mask.
A contest entry
- Scream Me Poetry & Kiss Me N Hell by Poetic Obscenity.
550 points, ended April 28, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Show me some love! by Silences Voice.
650 points, ended April 30, 2008, 16 entries
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1200 points, ended September 6, 2008, 39 entries
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825 points, ended October 7, 2008, 14 entries
Gold trophy winner
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What do you think of the ending?
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wowowowow
i know ive read it before but i just lose all emotion when i read this! its so amazing!
love you! good luck -
soft touching write of tender emotions. A mask man writing such sweet words of care. very nice.
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OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOh.......... hhhhhh....... Mystery man. I like this poem. Great job. Keep it up. Thank you for entering and good luck.
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Aww That is such a cute poem and such an adorable story. Great write indeed. It had a wonderful rythem to it, very "lore".
Great job
Thanks for the entry and good luckin the contest.
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omg! this was a great poem larry!!!!
wow!!!
great job
this makes my favorite!!
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