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Harrison the Sweetheart

My cat's on crack,
That's for sure.
He chases after air
And never stays in one spot for too long.

He scares my sister
And makes me laugh.
You ask him to kill a mouse,
You'll still have a mouse.
He doesn't get much,
But what he doesn't catch,
He makes up in love for everyone.

He's black and white,
And so very small.
He ain't got a tail,
But, he's cute.
He's my little baby,
And he's looking at me.

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Don't ask where this came from, my cat was looking at me, looking stoned(yes, he has a stoned look) and I felt like writing a poem about him. (pic is of him)

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  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    December 2, 2008

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    LOL! This is so cute! I have two cats myself and they totally rule the house. Like yours, I think that mice kind of scare the both of mine since they are and always have been indoor cats. I think that they would have no idea what to do with themselves if they saw a mouse! Sad isn't it? LOL!




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  • storiesuntold gold member
    October 18, 2008

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    This is cute

    I have a bobtail cat as well and his name is Banjoe he looks like a penquin when he sets up and he weighes about 15 pounds .But oh what a personality he has he cracks me up


  • worshipchick
    March 29, 2008

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    Cute poem! You captured the personality of cats- I definitely know what you mean about that stoned look :-) My cat actually acts drunk if you give him catnip. Anyway... I though the opening stanza was very strong, and the ending is really cute. The middle reads a little awkward, but still fits with the poem. Good write!


  • XxESPNCHICKxX
    February 19, 2008

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    This is cute I have cats of my own and I understand when you tell them to do something they don't do it...and my two cats stare at me too and I don't know why...but animals are so fun to have though