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Tied with lies

You covered my eyes with your hands
Promising surprises, unimaginable.
So I walked with you, blindly.
I gave you my life, blindly.
And you took it like a greedy child.

You tied my hands with your lies
Promising love, unimaginable.
So I let you lead me, blindly.
I gave you my heart, blindly.
And you kept it like a greedy child.

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  • Endeavor gold member
    January 11

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    Good


    You tied my hands with your lies
    Promising love, unimaginable.
    So I let you lead me, blindly.

    I would call it

    "Tied with Lies"

    Rick