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My suicide is the quietest way for you to kill me

I hit the wall in frustration
I'll hate until the end of time
I'm bleeding out
conversation
why wont it kiss me

Your my suicide note
your my will to die
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it defines me
it bleeds me
it kills for me
my suicidal tendencies

They cry for me


........My suicide is the quietest way for you to kill me.......

You wont give up
selfish bitch!
you bring me down
I wont be able to take much more
.....
and you know that.....

So why don't you slit my wrists for me?
save me the trouble
cut my heart out and abuse my innocence
why?

Why?

WHY?!!

you can't live with the fact you killed me
but you can live with the fact I killed myself.....
Typical..
for you of course
saying I'm nothing

Nothing....

that say's alot to me
don't you know that?
oh wait your nothing..
so now your pinning it on me.......

How about I pin it on your grave
In Loving Memory of a MURDERER...

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MCR

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  • xXsoulxcollectorXx
    February 23, 2008
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    great write,loved the last line,thanks for entering the contest!!!


  • satan-
    February 20, 2008

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    Powerful. I think that one word sums this up nicely But yeahh...it is quite a powerful poem...filled with lots of emotion and depth. Thanks for entering!