As the day passes
I look up at the clouds.
Thinking of what tomorrow will bring
A beautiful day of singing birds
The smell of beautiful roses
A cool spring breeze by the river
Who knows what tomorrow will bring
All we can do is wait for a brand new day
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Is great to read poetry about hope that tommorow will be a brighter day. Love this poem x Well done lil sis
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This is a nice little poem.
Your choice of wording is excellent. You have a lot nicer outlook on the new day, than I do. It was a nice little uplifting poem. I expected something different from the title, but that's because I seem to look towards the negative aspects of things I suppose, at least I'm used to that. You gave me a different outlook, and that's good in itself. Connie
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Wow. This is a really beautiful short peice. You have a gift of writing so that the one that is reading the poem can enjoy what you are talking about as well. (I especially liked line six.) God Bless
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Beautiful
Beautifully worded piece
and a nice message as well
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beautidful sissy
i love you -
very pretty
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