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  • SmokinHotWhiteTiger
    February 20, 2008
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    Very Nice

    Short n sweet but beautifully depictured! I agree with the contest judge below its like a sheet of black ice to me and the tiring spinning outta control until soemthing sharp pops the tire. any ways excelent work all round and keep up the good work

    • haley27
      February 20, 2008
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      Thank u

      Last month I had that happened to me. I got overwhelmed of the whole ordeal stranded. Thank u for the wonderful critique given to my poem. Haley27


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    February 19, 2008

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    oh the ice would do it, as flat tires are a hazard
    versus sheets of ice, good entry, thank you good luck...
    Moons

    • haley27
      February 19, 2008
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      Thank u

      I'm glad it made u smile. Haley27