pavement
looking glass
flat tire
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Very Nice
Short n sweet but beautifully depictured! I agree with the contest judge below its like a sheet of black ice to me and the tiring spinning outta control until soemthing sharp pops the tire. any ways excelent work all round and keep up the good work
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Thank u
Last month I had that happened to me. I got overwhelmed of the whole ordeal stranded. Thank u for the wonderful critique given to my poem. Haley27
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oh the ice would do it, as flat tires are a hazard
versus sheets of ice, good entry, thank you good luck...
Moons
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Thank u
I'm glad it made u smile. Haley27
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