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Me and You

My walls black with whitened stains,
Covering my colored pains.
The sky white with darkened clouds,
Looking out to earthlings’ crowds.
Earthlings crowds of only two,
White and black, not me and you.
Gone to the angst of shadow’s rage,
Here we lay our frightful stage.
But through the midst of black and white,
Purple lies deep in my sight.
A color of difference, of a joyful tune,
Brightening the days of afternoon.
Purple a color unique to its own,
Sitting on its royal thrown.
Black and white, but purple too,
Now perhaps there is me and there is you!

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  • k.a.s.s.i.e
    February 23, 2008

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    "Here we lay our frightful stage .
    But through the midst of black and white,
    Purple lies deep in my sight."
    this part is way cool. i love purple!


  • takemypainaway
    February 22, 2008

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    i like this

    purple= best color

    this has a good rhyme

    and good meaning

    thank you for entering

    --kat


  • oldphotosonlybringt
    February 19, 2008

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    Earthlings crowds of only two,
    White and black, not me and you

    love these two lines but the poem its self
    is just great sweetie,
    best wishes in the contest
    you did a great job take care and lots of love

    endless-lover