Playful and simple, yet very complex
Open and passionate, compromising my soul
Naive and yet mature, which way shall I roll?
Yonder off the distance, awaiting my own land
Partial to love, against the angst of hate
Raining, like tear drops that glide across my face
Indefinite, not solid in any which case
Darling and sweet, yet bitter and cold
Enchantment around me, my story untold
Author notes
acrostic option
A contest entry
- Some off the wall options by takemypainaway.
450 points, ended March 3, 2008, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Any lines your hated.. maybe liked??
Comments
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I hav eknow Idea what acrostic is but you did wonderfull.
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very nice rhyme you have here
I like this poem alot
and you have a great name too
wonderfull poem
thank you for entering
--kat -
I enjoyed reading this piece of poetry. It is a very well written acrostic. I hope it does well in the contest.
Kelli
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