Candle in the night
Shining brightly for us
Baby, now is the time
For two lovers in lust
m a k e l o v e
Author notes
Prompt: Picture of a candle! Heh.
A contest entry
- Picture Inspired by AliceinPoetryLand.
600 points, ended February 19, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I really liked this one. It is short, sweet and to the point. Thank you for your nice compliment you gave on the poem I entered in the contest. Sorry to see it didnt work out. I look forward to entering into more of your contests. Take care and God Bless.
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Thanks so much for this beautifully sensual write.
Gaylene
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Lust is one of those things that culminates and is gone, without love its almost like a nothingness. I enjoyed your write however. Good luck in the contest.
Kelli -
Nice job, lots of emotion in this piece, you did a great job in so few words, goodluck in the contest
Karen
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