judge: You are in court for the death of bunny mcfluff.How do you plead?
me (aligator): guilty
Judge: explain then
Me:
If i was an
aligator with a
little bunny friend
it would be so hard
to pretend to not
want to eat him.
He is infact meat--im a carnivore
my stomach pains
i am so sore.
i fight my urges i fight my craves
i dont wanna dig my best friends grave
oo but if i ate him nothing would be left.
my best friend constantly puts me through a test.
he acts as if he teases me--though it isnt true.
i want to go up to him and say "I WANT TO EAT YOU!"
then id gobble him all up,
but id be in a muck
because i would have eaten my best friend!
oh how hard its been!
but finally finally today i gave in
and i ate my very best friend.
i feel so bad--i feel so guilty
but if i hadnt of eaten him it would have killed me.
judge: but you killed him
me: yes yes i did and he was my very best friend. oh but honey that was a tasty bunny.
Author notes
5) Write about how hard it would be to be an alligator whose best friend is a bunny
A contest entry
- Some off the wall options by takemypainaway.
450 points, ended March 3, 2008, 24 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - GROUP CONTEST ONLY: A group for animal lovers by bananasfoster42.
1750 points, ended June 1, 2008, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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LOL!! this is awesome!!! i can see the conflict of the alligator!!! great write, thanks for the entry!
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Aww! It is nature and this is too cute! Love it. It's a sad story. I didnt want the alligator to eat the bunny! Nice write! I hope you do well in this contest.
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lol loved it...if i were an alligator i would've eaten the bunny the moment i first met it!!
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This is better than mine
Is this for the Animal Lover's contest?
I think it's funny.
I see you too had to put 'warning labels' on for vegetarians.
http://allpoetry.com/poem/4153713
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cute!
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Thats an awesome write It made me laugh and im trying to be quiet! no wonder you won silver congrats btw. Poor alligator being teased
later gator
-AJ -
Haha, this made me smile.
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This is awesome! You should have won Gold! This is too cute!
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That is pretty clever. I enjoyed that. I need a good laugh today and well I got it. Thanks so much for the read. Keep it up as usual.
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haha...
of course this is what i wanted
its crazy and off the wall
i love it simply love it...
and oh how this made me laugh...
"yes yes i did and he was my very best friend. oh but
honey that was a tasty bunny."
I imagine this is how a frindship like that would end
thank you for entering
--kat -
Cute I enjoyed this one immensely
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