I would do anything to save you,
I would love you with all my heart,
I would protect you with my life,
But the only way is to be apart,
My heart sinks at that thought,
My head knows that its true,
I don't want to accept that fact,
But its the only way I can save you,
Don't look at me with sadness,
Don't tell me that I'm wrong,
Because all I want right now,
Is to be held inside your arms,
I would do anything to be with you,
Even though my heart is breaking,
I'm afraid that you'll get hurt,
Because its from me that you need saving.
Author notes
its for option 5 in the contest options and prewrites contest..... the quote is from one of BxLGuardian's poems....
"How can I protect you, when I'm the one who might hurt you."
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Comments
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a sad and well written piece
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Thanx!
Thanx.... im always looking for criticism and critiques
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a sweet write thanks for entering
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Wow this is a very beautiful indeed. I really do love the quote you used. NIcely done. This piece has fairly nice flow as well.
Thank you for entering my contest. I wish you the best of luck.
ale xox
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WOW! It's beautiful. I love it. Thanks for entering.
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Thanx!!!
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Excellent!!
Well done!I'm not sure, but it could be your lover or your mother whose arms you want to surround you. Either way it is quite well done.
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lol
Its a lover....that would be really odd if it was my mom.....thanx for the comment though!
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