Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

"Irresistable"

Missing image

Magnetic, are their  passions
deep within.

Their writhing dance of love

will now begin.

 

They are united!

 

 

 

Hypnotic, in their wonderland

entranced;

Their cravings going far

beyond romance.

 

Hunger excited!

 

 

 

Erotic serenades

that they perform

climaxing in a thunderous 

nectar storm.

 

Passions Ignited!

 

 

 

Climactic are their reasons 

to exist

and powerless

attempting to resist.

 

They cannot fight it!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

That Special sharing you find irresistable!

A contest entry

Have you ever met that one to fill all your special needs?

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

1 - 11 of 11

  • fairytalelovestory
    February 27
    Edit | Reply
    wow


  • Cant find herself
    September 27, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    mazingly described. Very passionate poem!


  • Galaxy2
    May 16, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    Brilliant!
    Well wrought!
    Irresistable!

    Galaxy2


  • Angelflower
    May 9, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    Beautifully written.. Very intense and sensual I love the flow in your words and the imgaery that you bring here.. well done! best of luck to you!!.

    Angel


  • BarefootSoul
    April 11, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    Very tense and passionate. The first stanza and the last stanza are powerful and it makes the experience feel complete. I especially love this stanza with it's beautiful metaphors. Thank you for entry Suz

    Erotic serenades
    that they perform
    climaxing in a thunderous
    nectar storm


  • My Souls Reflection gold member
    April 10, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    Wow...this is wonderfully erotic and it rhymed and flowed perfectly. I really felt the desire in this write. This is how it should be between lovers...completely irresistable to each other and filled with passion.


  • daviscth silver member
    March 5, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    Wonderful job with this.


  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    February 29, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    Passionate, sexy write... thank you for entering the contest. good luck

    ♥
    whisper


  • sweetgirlwa
    February 22, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    Very passionate write. Well done. Thanks for entering


  • creationsfromheart
    February 20, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    aw but yet, another wonderful write from you dear poet, I hope you know just how wonderful of a poet you truly are, each of your writes and their rhyme and flow are wonderful.


  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    February 20, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    A very beautiful and sensual poem, each word picked to perfection. The rhyme and rhythm wonderful.

    All the best in the contest.....Sue

1 - 11 of 11