My husband to be,
You think you don't make me happy,
and that you hurt me everyday.
Never think that,
my dear.
I love you and I will never leave,
I may have messed up and done some,
pretty bad things.
thats in the past,
please dont bring it back.
I promise you my heart,
as long as you want it.
Don't be afraid,
you wont lose me.
I'm yours forever.
My dearest Mac.
Author notes
I really dont know if this was right for the contest but i wrote it to my fiancee. i love him with all my heart and i wish he could see it.
A contest entry
- To the one you care about by A falling star.
2200 points, ended March 5, 2008, 19 entries
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This was fine. No worries
I hope he realizes how much you love him!
Thanks for entering!
-Sonya
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